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 Lombards are commonly seen as intelligent, communal, sociable, and mechanically-inclined individuals. They favor tasks and roles in society that fit those needs.
-Bulfas are commonly seen as strong, tactile<sup>[did you mean tactical?]</sup>, combat-ready, and lacking in fear or pain, and as such favor tasks and roles in society that fit those needs.
+Bulfas are commonly seen as strong, tactical, combat-ready, and lacking in fear or pain, and as such favor tasks and roles in society that fit those needs.
 ==Evolution==

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 ===Bulfa===
-Bulfas are shorter and are more adapted to fighting rather than fleeing. As such, most Bulfas are naturally strong and well-built. Bulfas are more pack-based rather than communal<sup>[isn't this the same thing?]</sup>, and as such they have more biologically defensive traits, such as claws, heightened senses, and low-light vision. Reproduction in Bulfas is similar to that of humans, with an average of three to four offspring. Technology has no effect on this, and Bulfas continue to reproduce purely by biological means. Bulfas psychologically are more diverse<sup>[what does this mean?]</sup> than the Lombards, and have no genetic phenomenon that causes them to be specifically inclined towards any sort of subject or field.
+Bulfas are shorter and are more adapted to fighting rather than fleeing. As such, most Bulfas are naturally strong and well-built. Bulfas are more need-based rather than social, and as such they have more biologically defensive traits, such as claws, heightened senses, and low-light vision. Reproduction in Bulfas is similar to that of humans, with an average of three to four offspring. Technology has no effect on this, and Bulfas continue to reproduce purely by biological means. Bulfas psychologically are more diverse than the Lombards, this means that they do not have any sort of genetic phenomenon that causes them to be specifically inclined towards any sort of subject or field.
 ==Abilities==

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-'''Fumerians''' ([IPA], scientific name ''Fera Sapiens Felidae'' or ''F. S. Vulpes'') are a race of sapient, long-eared furred individuals that originated from the planet [[Karthoum]]. Since their existence, they have been known to emigrate from their homeworld and spread out to inhabit other planets as well. The origins of how the Fumerians came to be is unknown, even to the Fumerians themselves, as there is little to no evidence supporting evolution or spiritual coming. There is a theory by the Cult of Dakology that has yet to be disproven, stating that it was in fact Dr. Dakka that created the Fumerian species through human testing. Whether this theory is correct or not is unknown.
+'''Fumerians''' ([IPA], scientific name ''Fera Sapiens Felidae'' or ''F. S. Vulpes'') are a race of sapient, long-eared furred individuals that originated from the planet [[Karthoum]]. Since their existence, they have been known to emigrate from their homeworld and spread out to inhabit other planets as well. The origins of how the Fumerians came to be is unknown, even to the Fumerians themselves, as there is little to no evidence supporting evolution or spiritual coming. There is a theory by the [[Cult of Dakology]] that has yet to be disproven, stating that it was in fact [[Dr. Dakka]] that created the Fumerian species through human testing. Whether this theory is correct or not is unknown.
 ==Appearance==
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 Bulfas have retractable claws that they can use in self-defense. They are also noticeably stronger than their feline counterparts, and are less fragile.
-Bulfas, being more spiritual, have an inherent affinity to [[Prana]], albeit weak, and may tap into it in dire situations for [[magic]].
+Bulfas, being more spiritual, have an inherent affinity to [[Prana]], albeit weak, and may tap into it in dire situations for [[Magic]].
 Bulfas also have heightened senses that stem from their vulpine roots, and can sense and detect various stimuli very quickly.

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 Bulfas also have '''heightened senses''' that stem from their vulpine roots, and can pick up and sense things much faster than normal.
 ==Behavior==
 ==Evolution==

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	==Abilities==		==Abilities==
		+	All Fumerians have enhanced hearing capabilities and are resistant to cold temperatures. However, the similarities of Fumerian ability stop there, and diverge into different abilities for the Lombards and the Bulfas.
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		+	===Lombard===
		+	Lombards can have any mixture of abilities that they all learn in due time, but there are a few biological abilities that every Lombard comes innately with.
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		+	'''Lombard Intellect'''is the genetic oddity that occurs in almost Lombards. This is the ability to pick up mechanical and technological knowledge really fast, and overall just tend to show intellectual traits. As such, it is concluded that pretty much all Lombards are innately intelligent and mechanically inclined, to some degree.
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		+	Lombards are also biologically built to have great '''agility''' and '''reflexes'''. Physically fit Lombards are capable of jumping in mid-air, run very fast, and absorb the shock value from 15 feet without harm. Lombards also tend to have quick reflexes, which could be from one of the few feline traits they inherited.
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		+	===Bulfa===
		+	Bulfas also have a few biological talents that are separate from Lombards.
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		+	Bulfas have '''retractable claws''' that they can use in a dire self-defense situation. They are also noticeably stronger than their feline counterparts, and are less fragile.
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		+	Bulfas, being more spiritual, have some '''Prana Affinity''', although not much, and may tap into it in dire need for magical use.
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		+	Bulfas also have '''heightened senses''' that stem from their vulpine roots, and can pick up and sense things much faster than normal.

	==Behavior==		==Behavior==

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 ==Evolution==
-Where the Fumerian species has evolved from is unknown, as there is no creature that is really close to the Fumerians biologically. The closest creature to Fumerians on Karthoum are actually Humans, which supports the CoD theory of their creation. However, scientific evidence on how the Fumerian species evolved from is small and vague, so it is still unclear what to say about the evolution of the Fumerians.
+Where the Fumerian species has evolved from is unknown, as there is no creature that is really close to the Fumerians biologically. The closest creature to Fumerians on Karthoum are actually Humans, which supports the CoD theory of their creation. However, scientific evidence on how the Fumerian species evolved is small and vague, so it is still unclear what to say about the evolution of the Fumerians.
 ==Lore==

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 ==Physiology==
-Fumerian biology is pretty close to that of a human more than any animal. Although Fumerians can prefer more colder temperatures and darkness as opposed to humans. They have no padding on their hands or feet, but they still have sharp teeth, and advanced hearing capabilities. They breath at a noticeably faster rate than humans, and as such have a faster heartbeat. This in mind, Fumerians also require more energy to function, don't get fat as much, and are susceptible to more diseases than humans.
+Fumerian biology is pretty close to that of a human more than any animal. Although Fumerians can prefer more colder temperatures and darkness as opposed to humans. They have no padding on their hands or feet, but they still have sharp teeth, and advanced hearing capabilities. They breathe at a noticeably faster rate than humans, and as such have a faster heartbeat. This in mind, Fumerians also require more energy to function, don't get fat as much, and are susceptible to more diseases than humans.
 ===Lombard===
-Lombards are taller and are more adapted to fleeing rather than fighting. As such, most Lombards are naturally agile. Lombards are also highly community based, and as such used buildings and numbers to defend themselves as opposed to biological defenses. Lombards are also more weaker and fragile than their Bulfa counterparts. Reproduction in Lombards are sexually much like a Human, with usually an average of one to two offspring, this, however, has been nullified with technology, and Lombards tend to use artificial ways to reproduce rather than the biological way.
+Lombards are taller and are more adapted to fleeing rather than fighting. As such, most Lombards have been built to be naturally agile. Lombards are also highly community based, and as such used buildings and numbers to defend themselves as opposed to biological defenses. Lombards are also more weaker and fragile than their Bulfa counterparts. Reproduction in Lombards are sexually much like a Human, with usually an average of one to two offspring, this, however, has been nullified with technology, and Lombards tend to use artificial ways to reproduce rather than than traditionally.
-Another strange attribute about Lombards is that they are innately intelligent, and mechanically inclined, despite environmental or genetic factors. It is unknown why these traits remain dominant and unchanged in a Lombard.
+Another strange attribute about Lombards is that most if not all Lombards are innately intelligent, and mechanically inclined, despite environmental or genetic factors. It is unknown why these traits remain dominant and unchanged in a Lombard.
 ===Bulfa===

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 ==Appearance==
-Fumerians all share the general traits of large, pointed ears, a long, straight tail, and fur. However, there is some differences in appearance that separates the species into two noticeable races; The Lombards (Lombeaux in Karthic-Royale) and the Bulfa (Bulfau in Karthic-Royale).
+Fumerians all share the general traits of large, pointed ears, a long, straight tail, and fur. However, there is some differences in appearance that separates the species into two noticeable races; The Lombards (Lombeaux in Karthic-Royale) and the Bulfas (Bulfau in Karthic-Royale).
 ===Lombard===