Ra'nun Agma - Revision history

Eebit: can't believe i messed that up

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can't believe i messed that up

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CodasterTheDisaster at 13:35, 6 April 2016

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CodasterTheDisaster at 00:26, 5 April 2016

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CodasterTheDisaster: /* History */

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‎History

CodasterTheDisaster: /* Personality */

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‎Personality

Eebit at 21:43, 4 April 2016

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CodasterTheDisaster: /* Appearance */

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‎Appearance

CodasterTheDisaster at 21:35, 4 April 2016

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-'''Ra'nun Agma''' is a [[Semonkin]] weaponsmith, specializing in woods and glasses, as well as an ex-mercenary of the [[Grey Aegis]] clan.
+'''Ra'nun Agma''' is a [[Demonkin]] weaponsmith, specializing in woods and glasses, as well as an ex-mercenary of the [[Grey Aegis]] clan.
 ==Appearance==

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-'''Ra'nun Agma''' is a demonkin weaponsmith, specializing in woods and glasses, as well as an ex-mercenary of the [[Grey Aegis]] clan.
+'''Ra'nun Agma''' is a [[Semonkin]] weaponsmith, specializing in woods and glasses, as well as an ex-mercenary of the [[Grey Aegis]] clan.
 ==Appearance==
-cm (~5'11"-6') tall, 72 kilograms, with ashen grey skin. Two glossy black horns jut from his temples, curving back in a crescent shape. Spiky, jet-black hair cascades well past his shoulders, and is kept free, though held back because of his horns. He is lean and well-muscled, strong from living in the wilderness for many years. His features are strong--heavy brow, chiseled jaw, and angular eyes. His back, shoulders, arms, and chest are all tattoed with intricate knotwork.
+cm (~5'11"-6') tall, 72 kilograms, with ashen grey skin. Two glossy black horns jut from his temples, curving back in a crescent shape. Spiky, jet-black hair cascades well past his shoulders, and is kept free, though held back because of his horns. He is lean and well-muscled, strong from living in the wilderness for many years. His features are strong--heavy brow, chiseled jaw, and angular eyes. His back, shoulders, arms, and chest are all tattooed with intricate knotwork.
 ==Personality==
+Ra'nun is quiet and reserved. He is somewhat grumpy and gruff, but he's got a tender heart, deep down. He is quick-witted, despite not having a formal education. He does not trust clans very much, after what happened with his last clan.
-Ra'nun is quiet and reserved. He is somewhat grumpy and gruff, but he's got a tender heart, deep down. He's quick-witted, despite not having a formal education. He doesn't trust clans very much, after what happened with his last clan.
 ==Skills and Abilities==
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 ==Quotes==
 ==Trivia==

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-'''Ra'nun Agma''' is a [...]
+'''Ra'nun Agma''' is a demonkin weaponsmith, specializing in woods and glasses, as well as an ex-mercenary of the [[Grey Aegis]] clan.
 ==Appearance==
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 ==History==
-Born in city controlled by a powerful demonkin clan, Ra'nun grew up among the woodworkers and craftsmen. He didn't have much magical potential, but he was still good with his hands so he was apprenticed at a young age. He eventually joined up with a clan of demonkin mercenaries and craftsmen. He remained with this clan, until he broke a rule of the clan by stealing materials to forge a weapon with. He was run out, and he thought he was being pursued, but a clan of knights came after the mercenaries. As it turns out, Ra'nun's old clan was secretly raiding and robbing smaller settlements, and the leader was wanted by several clans.
+Born in city controlled by a powerful demonkin clan, Ra'nun grew up among the woodworkers and craftsmen. He didn't have much magical potential, but he was still good with his hands so he was apprenticed at a young age. He eventually joined up with a clan of demonkin mercenaries and craftsmen, known as the [[Grey Aegis]]. He remained with this clan, until he broke an important by taking materials without permission to forge a weapon. He was run out, and he thought he was being pursued, but a clan of knights came after the mercenaries. As it turns out, members of Grey Aegis were secretly raiding and robbing smaller settlements, and the leader was wanted by several clans.
 ==Quotes==

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 ==History==
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+Born in city controlled by a powerful demonkin clan, Ra'nun grew up among the woodworkers and craftsmen. He didn't have much magical potential, but he was still good with his hands so he was apprenticed at a young age. He eventually joined up with a clan of demonkin mercenaries and craftsmen. He remained with this clan, until he broke a rule of the clan by stealing materials to forge a weapon with. He was run out, and he thought he was being pursued, but a clan of knights came after the mercenaries. As it turns out, Ra'nun's old clan was secretly raiding and robbing smaller settlements, and the leader was wanted by several clans.
 ==Quotes==

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